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[WIP] Parental Rehearsal [Page 31]
🕑 Added 2023-03-06 18:16:15 +0000 UTCLatest wip of the Zootopia comic, seems like Nick isn't happy how things turned out!
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Comments
Thanks a lot Ricardo!
Thanks Secret, thanks Gavyn!
Ricardo de Cervantes
"Time flys" just adding an "s" corrects the tense and "See you around then!" is fine, adding a comma does help too "See you around, then!"
Gavynnnnn
“See you around then!” is fine actually. I argue it works better here because there’s no set date for a meet up. It implies they’ll just run into each other next time. Just add a comma to say “See you around, then!” so as to not indicate ‘then’ as a place or time, but as dismissal. “See you then!” is what you say to someone after making plans.
Some corrections "Time flies!", "See you then!"
