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Cliffhanger?
🕑 Added 2016-04-18 06:49:58 +0000 UTC I have two scenes roughed for the next book. One sequence is 9 pages long and the other is 5. Should leave the second one (a re-vist of the Roger Rabbit sux-o-lux scene) just at the moment of bigness? This would leave it open to further bigness in volume 12, or complete the scene?If it leave it as a cliff hangar, that would mean I could complete the book faster and hopefully get it done around the beginning of May 1st.
Give me your opinion.
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Loner2000
The inflation scene itself. =o I remember that right around when he gets to his full size, it cuts away, then comes back to him slightly bigger/at his limit right before he flies off. =)
GreyofPTA
Which scene was this?
GreyofPTA
Okie dokie
Addy
I think a cliffhanger would work well with this. Makes the next one even more anticipated
Reggie Fox
Cliffhangers are deliciously devious. And I think appropriate here. :)
Some One
<a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ussCHoQttyQ" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ussCHoQttyQ</a>
Loner2000
If I remember the clip correctly, they do cut away and come back. So doing a similar thing in the books would be kind of a homage to that. =P
Loner2000
If I remember the clip correctly, they do cut away and come back. So doing a similar thing in the books would be kind of a homage to that. =P
JulioMartell
like how one of the previous volumes had bindi chewing something, then suddenly the scene cuts with her being super inflated. Then the scene is continued in the next famous flateys much later. But I say, work with what will be the easiest.
Serith
Moment of bigness? I don't know what you mean by room for more expansion in vol. 12. I mean, the Roger rabbit scene doesn't strike me as one that would work in two parts. But I assume you have it worked out, so yeah, I would like it sooner, and drawing out the scene a bit would be cool.
JJ
No, it's one from Thanks But No Thanks where Perry and Dr. Doofenschmirtz get inflated. If you want, I can message you a video of it tomorrow.
JJ
No, it's one from Thanks But No Thanks where Perry and Dr. Doofenschmirtz get inflated. If you want, I can message you a video of it tomorrow.
GreyofPTA
Is it the space suit one?
JJ
I would say go ahead and finish it up if you want to that way you have the whole thing in there and can do complete new ones in 12 when you. Or if you really want to get it done by May 1st, then yeah, go for the cliffhanger. Guess it depends on how many more scenes you plan on doing and how long it takes you to ink and color the book. So your choice. Plus, I found another inflation scene you could use in the future from Phineas and Ferb if you are interested.
