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Marie the Brat, Part 5

🕑 Added 2023-09-19 03:20:30 +0000 UTC

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Anthony Murdock

hey glad you are back

Josh Stack

I am consistently impressed by your ability to make humiliation so adorable, not to mention your quality writing in general. Small details like “the brain is a naturally lazy organ” (personally I prefer the term efficient) really elevate your work from just fetish material to genuinely interesting stories. I can’t help but pity Hilda. She may be a selfish coward, but her horror at being reduced to the plaything of a sadist makes me want to hug her and tell her it will be ok. I wonder if Marie’s love of cuteness is a side effect of her “curse”. There are many ways to humiliate people, and few of them are this adorable. She could make them give play-by-plays of their most embarrassing memories in exquisite detail, confess disgusting personal habits, be constantly prone to emotional breakdowns, but instead she chooses to turn them into friendly, happy, bunnies, bimbos, and babies. Pauline, Hilda, and Diane are just so endearing, even if their fates are rather tragic. Your exquisite descriptions of their outfits definitely help in that area. The smell of Marie’s dirty diapers being what finally pushes them over the edge into blissful obedience is also a very fun idea.


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