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Nellie and the Nanites - Bk2 - Ch.32

🕑 Added 2024-02-20 09:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Clayton Danvers

Thanks for the great idea; I'll look into that. Cheers!

Eleeyah

That makes sense - but the execution here still feels slightly off on that, since there isn't even a hint of it. Maybe have her actually feel the anger and frustration, but bite it back with a thought and a sigh?

Clayton Danvers

She has a lot of experience with idiot teens from her time in the orphanage. More on this in the next book!

Eleeyah

Hmm. Why's Nellie not extremely pissed at Jo? Considering his incomparable stupidity and untrustworthiness, I'd frankly expect her, Lucy, and Paren to be utterly fed up with him.


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