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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 23, You Can't Hide Your Lyin' Eyes
🕑 Added 2025-11-01 07:54:34 +0000 UTCThings are speeding up. Here's a chapter that advances a few plot lines and reintroduces a character we haven't heard from in a while. Also, there's an illustration. SFW. The first is what I wanted to show. The second is a hilarious misunderstanding of my prompt for the picture on the first attempt. I just wanted the other bikes to be a bit smaller than Jake's to match the narrative, but that is what I got. It's so bizzarre, you can't help but laugh. Even those of you who dislike my illustrations should take a look. It'll ease your mind about AI taking over the world.
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Al Steiner
To even say that would be an unacceptable spoiler. Sorry. And I am quite fairly compensated by Amazon and whatever Bookapy is going by these days. Not to mention the generous contributions from my Patrons like yourself.
Christopher Emge
What are we looking at... rough ball park... for this one wrapping and being on Amazon kindle? I like to get it all at one time and from Amazon so I can get it in my Kindle easily. I am eager to get my hands on the finished book and immerse! Also, do you get a fair cut of sails from Amazon? I know it's not a big purchase price but aside from easy Kindle accessibility, I like to give back just a little more for your efforts.
Ryan B
Really liked the contrast between the Jake and Matt scenes. In my mind I pictured the bike scene as bright and exciting vs a depressing and almost dark scene at Matt’s place- another great chapter!
Russ Wideman
jeeeeez, I can't get that song outa my head!!! Thanks Al.... thanks a lot. (great story line though!)
