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Vol. 4 Chapter 23: Distraught (Part 3)

🕑 Added 2024-06-22 12:33:38 +0000 UTC

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Jonathan Wint

What I really like about this story you are creating villains. I know that later on down the road maybe a thousand years maybe less than 50 you will have the hero trying to fight back the evil human Empire with a Evil Vampire Goddess Queen. Trying to save the last of these Elves from Extinction. And it all should be cliche but we were at the beginning and we will know how evil was born. How it was earned. How do I know this? It's prophesied so this isn't even a Spoiler you've out and out said this is what's going to happen. All these wonderful Heroes are going to become monsters for the most righteous of reasons. It's like a car accident no one can prevent. When or if your Morgoth falls.. Will she fall? We will not know who to root for only but to weep! When if the Hero Fights the Death Knight Rogan will We weep? Will He win? Wisteria sounds like a kingdom of the undead to me. But that I am Guessing. But Undead Queens tend to rule Undead Lands.

Jonathan Wint

Ayana got the feel of a Classic Hero. So will she become a Classic Evil when the Genocide Begins? I love this story!

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oops fixing it

Jonathan Wint

He liked him, he was nice, but she just couldn’t help but keep him away from getting closer. correction He liked HER, he was nice, but she just couldn’t help but keep him away from getting closer.


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