MegSyv
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🕑 Added 2015-02-13 14:15:22 +0000 UTC Remember Revolting References #1? https://www.patreon.com/creation?hid=1419976 I finally got around to sketching out the page it's for. (Hmmm. I've gotta fix that tangent line in Panel 3, there. That's an industry no-no.)
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Meg Syv
See how the line of the wall on the right kind of lines up with her back as it goes down the panel? That's an industry no-no. You're supposed to break up shapes where you can, to help make the artwork "easier to read." It's a super subtle thing, almost unnoticeable if you aren't looking for it, but it's also easy to fix and really does make things look better.
Shield Generator 7
tangent line? I don't see what's wrong with panel 3...
Shield Generator 7
lol it kind of looks likes she's texting in panel 1
