Ch4 Trimmings (Part 2)
🕑 Added 2015-09-18 14:43:39 +0000 UTC So many trimmings. So many.Here are two pages from two different concepts that both didn't end up making the cut. I just couldn't figure out how to take them from these points, but I still like the energy and emotion in them.
The concept on the left page is one I'm hanging onto, though. It'll probably make it into the comic at some point.
Comments
Meg Syv
HAHAHAHA! Aw, I'm sorry for emotions! Don't worry - Orrig gets healed right up by one of the Healing Professors in this version of the script. He's fine - but Brent is pretty shaky the rest of the chapter. It's kind of adorable. I still want to work that into the comic somehow. One day.
YOU CANT TRIM THIS PAGE BECAUSE OF BRENT'S FACE AND I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO ORRIG
Shield Generator 7
I misread the last panel at first glance and thought it said "it's a pun!"
Hariman
More Drath are going to try to escape. It doesn't mean they'll succeed. ;)
Naziha Zahed
I'm guessing more drath are about to escape from various holes in the ground... plot holes!!! (I kid)