How to Write a Concise Script
🕑 Added 2016-04-18 19:44:01 +0000 UTC 1. Have a thousand different versions of a script where Thistle sees/hears the explosion and runs towards it.2. Ask yourself if it can be summed up in one panel/4 words.
3. Draw that panel.
4. Hope it won't disappoint readers.
5. Suffer mild panic attacks until reader response.
Comments
Meg Syv
she's just so tired all the time poor bb
Meg Syv
OH THANK GOODNESS
Becca
6. watch as that becomes the best scene of the that days update. (That is an awesome scene. I love it.)
Naziha Zahed
Awwww, poor girl got herself so flustered with over exerting her abilities that she can't English anymore. *hugs poor baby*
peter allen
Dont worry meg, I'd be more concerned if thistle jumped into a long flowing speech when she's obviously exhausted.
Meg Syv
oh dear
Meg Syv
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Excellent: all the information without unnecessary pronouns or prepositions. Everyone should speak more like Orrig (or Thistle with a possible concussion).
Big bada BOOOM! New Thistle Theory involves thermal tape lingerie. :P But will they make her present a Multi-Pass?
Raye.Guns
Proof that Thistle is a hero: she runs towards the danger instead of running away from it. Precious cinnamonroll.