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Chapter 100 – The Night Everything Changed

🕑 Added 2024-10-21 10:08:01 +0000 UTC

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richard C bond

This story is just lovely, it is really stark how much the protagonist is a caring human instead of a soulless heaven-defier. That said, this chapter has one odd note for me: Benton hops over the wall and immediately dominates/restrains the bad cat, but then proceeds to test his defenses for a bit while ignoring the child bleeding out in the corner. I know everything works out, but it feels out of character for him to focus on playing with his resistances and skills while a child is in danger. Maybe he should have fed the kid a pill immediately after pinning the cat?

Jeff091

while googling it you could also stumble upon to lie | lied | lied | lying | lies the verb for "telling a lie" (saying something that is not truthful)

Jeff091

verb 1 (the correct verb in this situation, which you are using) to lie | lay | lain | lying | lies you are just using the wrong tense of the verb verb 2 (the incorrect verb in this situation, which you are not using) to lay | laid | laid | laying | lays

BWFoster78 Last

Thanks for the comment, but I'm not sure that's right. Google says that "lay" requires an object, as in you lay down a beast. Unless I'm just completely misunderstanding what that post is telling me, I think "lie" is correct.

Jeff091

hi, thanks for the story typo The beast whined, softly, unable even to draw in enough breath to screech properly as it lie there, unmoving. lie-->lay

Daoist_Matt

TFTC 😋🥳

BWFoster78 Last

Fixed. Now off to fix the two other tables where the error propagated.

Kyle Pemberton

It just the archery and spear techniques should be mastery according to the second to last paragraph before the table.

BWFoster78 Last

Thanks for letting me know. I'll check that tomorrow and correct as necessary.

Kyle Pemberton

The description of which techniques he raised to mastery and large success don't match the table?


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