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Chapter 185 – Fly to the Moon

🕑 Added 2025-01-29 16:33:42 +0000 UTC

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Monus

I probably worded that a bit harshly. So sorry about that. I feel like a lot of characters had recently been loosing a lot of depth and character qualties. Going a lot more into the standard Xianxia direction with 1D arcs. At first I thought that was a Benton only thing, but that seems to be less the case with each chapter? For example: '“We’re all angry, Master,” Yang Xiu said finally. “We want to punish the people who killed Ye Zan.”' Is a very weird line. Because only one person kills Ye Zan. Or at least was present for that. And they saw that person being utterly curb stomped. I don't quite know what they are expecting... But this feels just very very odd. Another example would be Benton's reaction. He made it previously rather clear, that he does not like how things are done in Xianxia land. Yet he does the following. 'Benton described his actions in Sixth Flawless Flowing City, killing fifteen more of the Jade Chameleon Golden Core cultivators and completely laying waste to their branch sect.' And the other paragraph that's his direct speech. It's all well and good that he's been truthful about his actions. But he's made his whole thing raising good people. And now he is sort of vindicating them, telling them that these actions were ok. And he would have done even more. But only stopped because of fear of retribution or more collateral damage? I feel like that's a character betrayal of a very high order. So he would have killed literally innocent people. He has actually. And he's saying that's ok. I can sort of see that Earth morals are tough to apply in a Xianxia world. And that insane people need to be shown borders in absence of being able to provide resocialization methods. There are a bunch of little similar instances in the last ten, maybe 20 chapters that have bothered me about the characters. I'm not saying I know how they would have behaved, but it feels like they do not think in some instances, or at least have little to no situational awareness.

BWFoster78 Last

You'll have to be a little more specific. I don't see anyone acting completely insane, much less everyone.

Monus

What's going on? Why is every character suddenly going insane/entirely overboard?

RedFaux

I hope he has a bunch of points when he gets to Nascent Soul so he can just instantly rocket to the peak of everything. Body, Mind, Soul, Spirit, all Peak Nascent Soul in an instant


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