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Mini Cafe 24 (end)

🕑 Added 2023-07-23 06:41:36 +0000 UTC

Comments

Moodson

Great work on first comic. I can't wait for one that focuses more on constant shrinking

Dovah

this was really cute, i liked it

ink

thanks, glad to hear that! taking it as a learning opportunity makes me feel better about.

Iron Chef Tonberry

It sounds like you learned a lot, and we got an excellent comic out of it. I don't see any downsides here. You did a great job on this, and I'm looking forward to the next thing.

ink

yea, that's what I usually do. setup a couple of checkpoints or situations I want to get to in the comic and just try to natural advance the characters towards that. but here it was just like maid cafe talking about your day and all that wholesome stuff, girlfriend experience, which would involve more writing which I really don't like to do.

Chabble

That's fair, I mainly mean in the sense of having a general guideline of what you want the overall story to be so you can keep is as lewd/safe as you go. Either way, I wouldn't overthink you, you do great work so just do what you enjoy.

ink

thanks, I just don't think I can make something planned out for constant updates. like the way I did the other comic that I fully released for the doujin collab was work on the pages out of order, sometimes I would draw the finish the last pages, then some in the beginning and some in the middle. it would be as if I posted Mini Cafe 20 before pages 17, 18, 19. this was a great learning experience though!

ink

thanks!

Chabble

I mean, when you start a comic about naked tiny girls lactating into people's coffee, it's not going to be 100% "wholesome", at least not in the traditional sense. Now, I'd say as far as lewd stuff goes, this one is like... wholesomely lewd", but yeah, if you want to make something that is completely wholesome, I feel like you'd have to plan that out from the very start. All that aside, this was still a very good comic and I enjoyed it a lot, looking forward to what you make next.