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Instead of Arya, I prefer her mom (Chapter 29)

🕑 Added 2023-10-23 20:34:53 +0000 UTC

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f0Ri5

that's an interesting observation. stay tuned for chapter 31 :)

gustyeagle

Cedric wasn't sus that their leader died when a spell was put on her, he wasn't paranoid enough to think he triggered something?

f0Ri5

i didn't really put it front and center in past chapters because it probably would've pissed people off, but cedric spent years in carvahall life-draining and experimenting on animals. it was mentioned, though

Mc

Gotta be honest this feels a bit... sudden. It's one thing from doing questionable mind wiping stuff for the sake of the greater good but killing people and having no reaction to it? It just makes Cedric look like a total sociopath and that Brom is in the right to be so damn weary

f0Ri5

Bro, where's he supposed to experiment on them? Right there in the bar at 3 am in the morning? He was in their heads too. What makes you think they're even capable of snitching on him in the first place? Just reserve judgement until the next chapter.

Alec

I've got to admit, this chapter really stretches my sense of disbelief. Not that your character would commit acts like this, but leaving them alive? After showing off his dark powers, walking away leaving them unmonitored, and unbound? I don't understand the rationale behind this choice. In this setting magic users are a rare, but known quantity, why wouldn't they just report him? I'm sure there are standing rewards on offer for such things, and even if there wasn't, after being violated in such a way I cant imagine them sticking around to be his gofers, especially since he doesn't even know how long he'll be in the area, or when he'll next be able to slip away. The original plan was sound, macabre, and not without risks give he'd need to dispose of the bodies with very distinctive markings of magical death, but supposedly the knowledge he could gain from experimenting on them would be worth it, but this? What does he even have to gain from this that's remotely worth both the risk, and the opportunity loss of losing them as experimental subjects? Maybe, maybe you could justify keeping one of them alive, having Cedric digging around in their minds would be a good excuse for knowing that one of them was ambitious enough to be a trustworthy pawn, but all of them? Every remaining pirate was judged trustworthy after being magically violated? Really?

f0Ri5

I can see how it comes across as kind of weird, I edited the chapter a few times and that part ended up looking strange in retrospect. It's an underworld thing, kinda like 'look, I fucked up, I'll punish myself as much as I have to, please don't murder us'. He didn't want to take the chance and wait to see what Cedric would do next. To the reader, magic isn't that big a deal, but in world, it's actually extremely rare, and Cedric showed himself to be both massively powerful and ruthless.

Ocean Breeze

Why did he chop off his fingers?


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