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Instead of Arya, I prefer her mom (Chapter 36)

🕑 Added 2023-11-10 20:13:43 +0000 UTC

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f0Ri5

What did Cedric do that was unrealistic?

Ocean Breeze

I'm starting to kind of like where the story is going, but everything is tainted by the totally unrealistic way that Cedric acted with Brom in the beginning, and by how he left Carvahal. If you are ever going to rewrite part of the story, I thing it should be that part.

Jonathan Shaw

It's just dragging on

xPYROTECHx

This whole section has been getting a little long in the tooth…

f0Ri5

They were part of a bigger organization originally...

Picklix

Another gang? More material for Cedric?

Igor

What...?

f0Ri5

I'll be back to my regular 2 day schedule after this one.


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