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[TWS] Chapter 72 - If You Gaze Long Enough Into the Abyss… [HIDDEN]

🕑 Added 2021-05-28 19:48:39 +0000 UTC

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James A. Murphy

I like that every summons isn't a newer hotter girl, I'm down for the group growing but I think it show sensible restraint not to grow the harem with every summons, this carries on in further chapters and I think it makes the series more enjoyable good job

hawkshe .

Yeah, it'd be great if it'd be built in like that, but for some reason there's not. I follow some patreon authors that add links to the next chapter at the end, but it really shouldn't be on the author to have to go back and do those kinds of tedious things that should already be included by default.

Saileri

Yeah, that's kinda a bummer there's literally no navigation. They could even slap a menu with listed published posts like somewhere on the right that would take like not space. But well. They only think about charging more money and adding more features that do that instead of QOL.

hawkshe .

I like Umbra, very different character and will add an interesting dynamic to the group. Also, sad there's not a link to the next chapter on this one, looks like I'll be opening like 20 tabs to get caught up on the story... *sigh*

Saileri

Naturally, things don't end here and are again touched on in the next chapters. Many details have been mentioned here and a few characters should be eager to ask questions.

Jacob A Smith

Its not bad. I thought it was a big emotional avenue, and then you didn't mention it.

Saileri

Oh well. Can't do much more about it. I've already designed it as fitting the situation as possible, including the characters. Not everyone has to agree with their choice or the taken risk, naturally.

Jacob A Smith

Not feeling the mind delve and then everyone being ok with it but sure. It's a plot point

Saileri

I know.

Talespinner Lore

-.- Suffering is right.

Ralph

Awesome chapter, interesting new character

Saileri

I would give if I could :p Just one more month of suffering.

Which means if the author got bored it could even become a haremite.... though seriously wtf could lay a seal that one of the most powerful beings couldn't break we need more chapters faster