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🕑 Added 2023-08-15 00:46:28 +0000 UTC

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Lyriker

I like the current version with Kane and would like to read more about it especially because of the unique future relationship between the girls who want him but won't get any of him that you promised on discord And the novelty of it being male lead But the most important thing is that you enjoy writing it So if you need to i would recommend rewriting it under a different name to keep the option of continuing it in the future If you ever figure out what is the problem of Male lead storys for you please tell me (only if you want to obviously)

Hooloovoo

I am enjoying it the way it is but, with it being a vastly different genre and setting from what I normally read, I have no real idea or expectations for the novel's direction. I am here entirely because I like your work. That said, the quality of a novel is always higher if the author is enjoying what they are writing. Thus my opinion is simply do what you think will make it more enjoyable for you. Whether that is making some changes, entirely rewriting it, or if you're not sure, just take a break. As long as you can get engaged in the story so can we.


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