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Sheltered CH44 - Business As Usual

🕑 Added 2022-07-30 21:50:34 +0000 UTC

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Ryan

More a joke about wanting more and not a comment about output, the rate your going is great and I love both stories. I do love the evolution of Emily as a little doing silly things like playing dress up on her own or even the bathtub scene a few hours ago she's really found herself there and it's safe to say it might have started out of love for Joyce but has grown into a love of her own

Emily breaking in the baby parts a bit more is always good, and yes, I totally agree that it could get a whole lot worse for her, haha. Who knows, maybe Emily's misbehavior might start to spike a little as time goes on... A pampered princess could possibly get too carefree if she has run of the castle for too long...! And yeah, pajamas she can't take off is just a plot device waiting to be exploited... Not quite sure what Amy has in store for Emily, though as far as it goes right now it seems pretty straightforward? Assuming nothing crazy happens, I could see it as a trial run that leads to Emily working with Amy a bit more, and maybe the projects could start escalating... I'm so glad to hear all the positive comments about the characters! I'm always open to criticism, of course, but I've tried to make fair/logical progressions with everyone or push them in a direction that I think I can get away with. The longer chapters I think make for a better read, but of course that comes at the cost of longer write times and such. In the past my long hiatuses have come from either business in other spheres or sometimes there being trouble/writer's block in moving forward with certain plot points or scenes. In all honesty, having a Patreon has effectively given me a deadline to produce which leads to (mostly) positive pressure. Without a doubt though this is the most consistent I've been, but I hope that doesn't affect the quality of my writing. With the whole ruined shirt thing, that's meant to be a sign of how carefree now Emily can get, or at least how willing she is to not consider certain consequences anymore (not thinking too hard about sipping juice with white and expensive clothes on). More of a silly moment that Emily can be as playful and messy as she wants, and Joyce wouldn't want it any other way. It's all the stuff that plays into kid-like behavior, and that's what she wants the most from her girlfriend. As for my other stories, a disclaimer: Currently, my other stuff isn't quite as lighthearted as this one. My other stories make more out of humiliation/difficult circumstances. Illegal Immigrant though as another longer form story works the same way with investing in multiple characters and building relationships, though with less chapters right now it hasn't been able to do that yet as much. Still like my other stuff though, haha. And without teasing too much, a later commission assuming it stays confirmed is going to hit some similar veins with Sheltered, but a bit different in relationship/dynamic. Stay tuned for that!

Sorry (and not sorry) to hear you're hooked! Yes, it's too bad that there's a long gap! I wish I could write them side by side for a same-week release, and that may or may not happen here or there, but it's a bit difficult with my schedule at the moment. I simply want to do too many things, haha. That's why I hope both mainline stories right now are entertaining for everyone, so the swap isn't minded as much!

Tis an unfortunate situation. My hands are tied, however! Stay tuned!

Jace

I agree with Ryan and Jenni! I really like the scenes where she is having to get used to using her diapers for everything, even if she doesn't totally enjoy it. She would enjoy it less if she got in trouble while messy and had to wait 10 minutes like Joyce threatens when she is wet, or if she woke up having to go, and Joyce isn't awake yet. Not much she can do in those pajamas. I'm hoping that she sees Amy while she is diapered. In one sense it means she would have the extra bulkiness which would possibly get her closer to the client's size. I also think Amy could be needing her for something else for the other project she wouldn't talk about. These characters have developed really nicely. I am pleased to be here and getting regular updates. It has been a great change from the long periods between chapters the past couple of years. At some point I do need to read your other stories. If they are even just half as good as this one (which I expect they are just as good) then they will be a pleasure to read. You have a talent. I appreciate the long chapters. I can only imagine you had to end this chapter where you did to leave room for what is to come. It does feel like Joyce is very slowly regressing, or allowing at least allowing Emmy to regress slowly on her own. It is also great that even though her shirt got ruined, she acted like it was material and replaceable, taking the opportunity to capture the moment.

Ryan

The only downside to this is, you have me hooked it's going to be a long 2 weeks until the next chapter. Ahh well good things come to those who wait (but if you wanted to drop an extra chapter or 12 I wouldn't complain)

Sorry, just to add to this because I accidentally sent it before finishing... Good characters, fun scenes, but less of a story-story with a beginning, middle, and end. I see it more of as something you can just drop into, read a few fun short chapters, then hop out and come back later. I don't want to come off as critical of the story though, because I do enjoy it for what it is (and the fact that I have so much to say about it, lol). So yeah, that's my book report for one recommendation!

My new favorite scenes I think are starting to become when Emily just hits those tangents and runs with them, haha. Hopefully by now they seem like fair jumps/progressions? And yeah, I had to include the sleeper. There might be more to that in the next chapter... Of course! Writing this stuff is always fun, so I'm glad other people get so much enjoyment out of it! And what? You want more?! Is my stuff not good enough for you?! Lol, in all seriousness, I don't do a lot-lot of reading other stories lately, partly from time constraints, but I do read a couple. For this dynamic the closest one that I can think of is: "I'm not a little girl!" by Alex Bridges? https://www.dailydiapers.com/board/index.php?/topic/69095-i-am-not-a-little-girl-really-scene-183-posted-73122/& If I were to summarize it, it's about the day-to-day of two married women very intimate with themselves and their kinks. The ABDL content is more so just diapers from what I've read, and at that it can be a fluctuating dial, but it doesn't change it being an enjoyable read. The narration is through the perspective of the sub in the relationship who can get a bit wacky with their thoughts. It's definitely a story though that I think focuses on the relationship and some of their antics. But in general it hits me more as a long series of vignettes. There is continuity and light signs of progression, but I guess what takes me in and out of it is that the certain conflicts I'd like to see or the progressions that I'd hope for don't seem to be touched on a whole lot.

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

Emily is progressing so nicely! Glad we got to see those cute pjs she can’t get out of, lol. On another note; thank you for writing. Sincerely, thank you. I come back to these characters again and again when I need a boost in life. Also, do you know of anything else out there with similar themes/dynamic as this story you would recommend?

So much cuteness! A delight to read.

Jared Godwin

NOOOOOOOO!!!! The cliffhanger, why? NOOOOOOO!!!!


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