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NEW WORLD : Final Exam - Page 111-115 [THE END]

🕑 Added 2021-08-07 00:20:23 +0000 UTC

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Shiftlock

I hope so

Jason Turner

My favourite types of stories I loved it, great job

sandman578

Nah, no sympathy for his mom. She knew it was a shrunken person just trying to get her attention and crushed it anyway. Kevin was setup to fail, Ms. Johnson knew what she was doing and gleefully watched events unfold. She knew she was shrinking him and called his mom in ahead of time. She told him avoiding giants was all he could do and the "final test" was just to avoid being stepped on by the next person and then he was free to go and fend for himself. She made no promise she would help him later so all he knew was that he'd been abandoned on the floor for rest of his life. So of course when the first giant he sees is his own mother, he's going to try and get her attention since it was his only chance for help. He's too desperate to stop and consider his own mother is one of the cruel giants.

Bigftlover79

This was dark and hot. Well done. And good ending. Beyond rendering, you have talent with writing too!

Kastakh

So its implied that she was told what she did? Thats pretty good. I like. Can't wait to see next project

Shatrr

I kinda like the abrupt ending. It’s kinda cruel and comical in a way. Ms. Johnson straight up told him to be careful and that you are treated differently as a tiny. Kevin didn’t listen and his own mother didn’t even recognize him and saw him only as a bug. Plus you don’t want the story to drag on with a plain conversation and I figure you have other projects to work on.

MasterShrinker

This one is unlikely, to be honest. I think the ending already shows the consequences of Kevin's bad decision (Ms. Johnson already taught him to never trust any normal-sized person. Anyone, including his own mother) which ultimately lead to his mom's brutality (and her misery and guilt of killing her own son unknowingly if you believe that Ms. Johnson will tell her the whole truth). Originally, I was going to prolong the story a little bit with Ms. Johnson lying about the whole situation by making some excuses about the disappearance of Kevin so Kevin's Mom can go home without worrying about her Son's disappearance. But I can't find any realistic excuse that allows a mom to be content about her own son's disappearance. Therefore I decided not to do so.

Shiftlock

Yeah i would like that too

Kastakh

Would love to see a chapter where we get the conversation and some closure or maybe the mothers reaction to the realization that she did her son like that.