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Conjoining of Paragons Chapter 29

🕑 Added 2022-02-27 20:57:40 +0000 UTC

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John Diggle

I actually really quite enjoyed the chapter as is. Almost completely without dialogue, I felt that it had a focusing effect on me and sort of highlighted the importance of what was happening. I read it like when you're hyper focused and all background noise fades away. That's what this chapter and this duel were for me.

ACI100

Hey! So sorry to hear you are having difficulties. All chapters are linked directly at the top of the patreon post announcing their release. The webpages on ACI100.com don't update automatically. There are days when we can get the chapter up for Patreon, but the person uploading (usually my editor, Athena) is in a rush, running errands, or has to do things for her other job and can't put it on the table of contents page. When in doubt, I always reccomend going through the link directly to it on Patreon, and failing that, all links have a set format. In the future, all links are aci100.com/(fic abbreviation)(chapter number). So, for example, chapter 19 of CoP is aci100.com/cop19. Hope that helps!

Robert

Great chapter! Really enjoyed the duel between the two. It would be really interesting to see even a bit of Emily POV in the next chapter from the Duel, even as a flashback. I wonder what Dumbledore's reaction is going to be when he hears about the Priori Incantatem. Can't wait for the next chapter!

guillaume

I cannot see the chapter on the web site

Trishula13

Loved the duel between Harry and Emily. Was very… cathartic? Some sort of feeling that I can’t quite describe. About whether or not to implement more dialogue between the two though, I feel like this chapter was more about Harry and what he was feeling and thinking while he prepared for such a monumental duel. Personally, I felt like that feeling was better communicated to me through the tone of the scene given Harry’s silence and inner thoughts. If there was going to be a dialogue scene, I’m not sure if that feeling would have been as intense as it was. Although a scene between his talk with Dumbledore and the duel might work, it certainly isn’t something that took away from the chapter.

Francis

Awesome chapter! I really look forward to when harry will start to see Emily as more then just Voldemort. As for the scene with Elena I feel like it would add more to the chapter tbh as well as some much needed growth in her character and her relationship with harry.


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