Adrian Oprea
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Detailed Weekly Update - November 10, 2024
🕑 Added 2024-11-10 21:19:04 +0000 UTCHello, revengers!
I spent a lot of this week relooking at older chapters to maybe change things around. One of the bigger things I did is that I added a sexuality choice in chapter 2, after looking at the lives the targets are living. This will help the narrator better when talking about their looks and not being thirsty for characters that your MC isn’t naturally attracted to.
There's also a choice for how much sexual experience your MC has, which should prove interesting when it comes to wooing your targets with your "skills."
I’ve also added a little flavor thing: if you choose the surname of one of your 8 extra fathers, you’ll get a little comment about their reaction. Since only 4 fathers have been presented so far, only these get a comment. I might also make it impossible to choose the surname of one of the targets, but I’ll think about it.
I also wasted some time trying to change a bit what happens in chapter 2. I need some opinions here, if anyone feels like chiming in. I was thinking of adding a conversation with the 9th dad before the MC talks to their mom about the video of the Tragedy, with this father actively pushing the idea of revenge. Not necessarily going back and doing what we are doing, but putting more seeds in our MC’s brain for the idea to go through. Idk, sorry for wasting time on something that I haven’t even gone through with. Tell me if it sounds good or if it’s just unnecessary.
Exact things I've written for previous chapters:
Added comments if you change your family name to be the same as one of your other fathers
Sexuality and experience choice in chapter 2, after checking what the targets are doing after the time skip
The public hoco proposal for Olivia is also written and done and, ohoho, it’s kinda cringe. I will love to see your reactions to embarrassing her like that. Or embarrassing your MC like that…
I know I'm not supposed to feel things for the targets, but I kinda felt bad writing this haha.
Exact word count for chapter 4 - 99,077.
Exact things I've written for chapter 4:
Finished what happens if you ask Olivia out publicly for homecoming
The plan for this week is to finish the public hoco proposal for Cecily and also Connor.
Thank you all for the continued support and see you next week, when chapter 4 will likely hit 100k words.
