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Modern Secretary 9 - Burying the Hatchet

🕑 Added 2024-01-14 19:16:25 +0000 UTC

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northdrop

This is still my favorite of your stories; Chloe is absolute marriage material and I’d have had the same reaction Alex did in this chapter when I first caught her getting railed by Edward that night:) I agree with kazama that this was a sudden change, though. Perhaps there is a part of the story that is being intentionally withheld until a later chapter that explains this shift in behavior:) we already know Alex loves the hotwife kink, he was just upset that Chloe got started without him, prompting him to question his position in the relationship. Alex getting rock hard and enjoying the interaction between them isn’t weird, then. Additionally, several chapters ago, Edward was playing with Chloe in his office whilst Alex watched and he was rock hard then, too (and it was shortly after the night they first hooked up). So, this is now the second time he’s watched them together since that night and still clearly enjoyed it. Chloe has been loving and apologetic since then; her character has been consistent. The only thing thats different here is Edward being empathetic and Alex buying it. Alex accepting that edward is being honest means that he’s willing to ignore all the terrible things Edward has said and done of late in the hope that Edward, in his inebriated state, is showing his true colors and actually cares about his former friend. Either Alex is more desperate for Edward to be who he once was than we realized or Edward is just a fantastic liar and this is all a ruse to manipulate Alex through Chloe. Who knows? Maybe Chloe is in on it and was ordered by Edward to do this as part of a twisted, sexy game. Perhaps he has his eyes set on the other woman in Alex’s life and is going to conquer her, too, before taking Chloe back once more? Let’s not forget that Alex’s self-aware assistant has just witness this whole thing go down and may now seek to incite similar passion in Alex through Edward, too. The possibilities are endless and I’m stoked to see how it all plays out!!! Thank you for the new chapter!

Kazama

I'm sorry but narratively this makes no sense. I understand that Alex has been portrayed to have conflicting feelings about how this all feels. But this still feels too sudden for him to just accept any of this. No matter the amount of enjoyment he derived from it he clearly hated it beforehand as well and it was a relationship breaker. The way it's presented here though describes Alex just... whipping his cock out at the first sign of things getting sexual? This begs the question why didn't he do this when Sarah was getting hit on? He actively got her out of there since he can't say no for multiple reasons, but for Chloe none of that even crosses his mind and in fact he performs a motion that most anyone would know showcases that he enjoys it? I can't tell if you just felt you wrote yourself into a narrative corner where the story went too far in another direction that you course corrected. Or if this scene is supposed to showcase that Alex was secretly enebriated and acted on impulses. Or even if Alex is faking his enjoyment just to get Erik to leave. If it's the first, Id rather have you explain that outright, post the chapter, then explain you'll edit previous chapters to showcase Alex's descent so it makes more sense. If it's the second, you highlighted only Erik's inebriation and not Chloe's or Alex's. If we're lead to believe that Alex drank you have to describe that as it's hard to believe someone who has what amounts to an enemy in their home would willingly get drunk enough that they become inebriated. If it's the third, again this needs to be described or at least hinted at. Maybe something about how Alex just wants the night to end and make it seem like he's into it, but it just gets the show on the road to get Erik out of there. Outside of that, these are just my thoughts on what happened, Chloe's already lying I see... I'm positive that anyone could agree that masturbating with another person is considered sex stuff, especially when Erik pushed for it, and she could have set a trend for this now cuckold relationship to actually have trust... Also, it's surprising that Erik is being shown to care for Alex while inebriated. So far in the story he's been antagonistic and even when Alex isn't in the scene he's been portrayed that way as well. Curious to know how that'll play a part in the future. Considering the narrative mess though I am hesitant for the next chapter. Except for the smut. The smut is at least awesome.


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