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Rules 16 - Fair Warning

🕑 Added 2024-02-09 19:49:52 +0000 UTC

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Darrow

Sage says "I'm not your fucking slave." Her problem is that she is. David walked in, and despite her protests and complaints, he did everything and anything he wanted, and she did everything he told her too or wanted her to do. She tried to stand up for herself. He pushed and she literally folded to her knees. There's more than that - he literally took her in her place of personal power - her office where she's in charge. He took her in her workplace, intruding on a completely different dimension of her life. Basically, the messages are visceral - he has all the power, and there's nowhere in her life he can't go. He repeats it bluntly "I'll fuck you when and where I want." Sage finds herself unable to do anything but whine and bleat about it, begging for accommodation while trying not to beg. Two things seem really interesting with the encounter - both involve her trying to hold onto some illusion of control. One is the video - sort of a token plea that it's not real, that the game is going on and this is part of it with Jeremy. David accepts this with extremely poor grace and announces it will be on his terms, Jeremy won't see it all, and Jeremy won't see the good stuff. This isn't a negotiation or an agreement. Basically, Sage was begging, David threw her a bone, and he exacted his toll. The fact that it happens the way it does show's exactly how powerless Sage was. The fact that she insisted on it shows exactly how desperate she is to have even the illusion of power. The woman's lying to herself about her situation, something that David takes advantage of. The other is the scene in the door, where Sage, naked, fresh fucked, is holding the door open only a crack, trying to get rid of her coworkers, talking to them, looking them in the face, while David starts fucking her again. Again, this is David not accepting any limits whatsoever, enjoying transgressing, and putting her at risk. At the same time, we see how desperate she is to contain and control the situation. David's fucking her, David is in total control, but she's desperate to show the world her normal face, her normal life, etc. Again, this is something he uses against her. I said back in Chapter 5, that was the Chapter that David won and he broke her. I think I'll stand by that. After that, every single encounter between David and Sage follows the same pattern - he shows up and demands, she tries to resist, she surrenders completely and then it's sex and her desperately trying to convince herself that she's still in control, that she's won or at least not lost, that she has some shred of agency. Yes, she is his fucking slave. She's just frantic not to admit it to herself, or to admit what it means. She's desperate to try to pretend her life is normal and that she's in charge of it. But she's not fooling David. She's only fooling herself, and tragically, she's fooling Jeremy. If he realized how out of control things were, how much trouble she was in, he could act. But part of what David has done is continually manipulated a wall between her and Jeremy, forcing her into first lies of omission, then outright lies, then betrayals. In the later chapters - twenty on, he not only cuts Jeremy out of her life, but he also takes her away from work. So although he wins every battle, his control seems to extend progressively. The more she surrenders, the more and larger her further surrenders.

northdrop

This is a necessary chapter to outline the changing dynamics in relationships amongst the characters:) I love gratuitous sex scenes as much as the next reader, but, creating some tension between David and theo makes for a number of interesting plot points later. Sage and theo playing a game that could result in either an affair or petty revenge adds an element of danger to the story, too:). Thank you for adding more to your universe! I wonder if Sage did send those cum-soaked photos of herself to Jeremy as David instructed; he should be allowed some fun in all this, too ;)


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