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🕑 Added 2015-10-10 04:43:00 +0000 UTC Next///////////
Alright so far those backgrounds are not as bad as I thought, technically if I woke up early one day and was very determined I could wrap a full page in one sitting. Not the little 5 hrs job it used to be, but not crushingly time consuming either. Still, it's late so I'll probably have a fresh look at it again in a few days and do some light edits.
Btw I did read your Halloween suggestions, but I wasn't fully focused due to the page work and all, I'll re-read them again tomorrow and give proper replies.
Edit: Corrected some effects and typos.
Comments
olsen1a
See it now, fairy in panel 2 is not the same as in 1 and 3, I thought it was the same one. Tarah has pretty large breasts, Irah has normal ones and Evelynn has small.
It's something I must be careful with indeed, but I want to point out Irah's breast in panel 1 seem bigger because gravity pull stuff down. And you realize on panel 2 we Tarah, not Irah? Not the same fairy.
olsen1a
Notice one thing about the breasts, their size depend on angle of view, they are small seen from front. Yes its probably me who use 3d and daz studio where the breasts stay the same from all angles (and clip with arms if large and arms is forward) See red fairy from frame 2 to 3, don't bother to fix, just be aware of it. Far more visible in the shaded drawings who is beautiful, its art not an comic.
Personally I don't mind the bubbles standing out. Also any coloration could be tricky since the text itself can be any number of colors.
Alright I'll make those corrections in the next edit.
GrimFC
Hrm, the speech bubbles really stand out now that everything else is more.. 3D. Perhaps adding a very faint background coloration to the bubbles (a bit grey?) to make them less blindingly white would result in the bubbles standing out less?
Mouseguru
...my butt hurt*s* and today really suck*s*... Also, "sooth*e*".
