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🕑 Added 2017-10-14 02:54:57 +0000 UTC Alright, the middle panel's structure is a bit counter-intuitive, but I want to hear you opinion. If people don't like it, I can probably restructure the text to make it match better. I just really wanted to draw that angle, and text is easier to change than art :PEdit: Moved some stuff around.
Comments
Laura milne
looks good eldrik! and the bubbles i understand to realy just gota look to see whos talking :D atlest i see who is talking to who
Perniciousducks
Its confusing in black and white, but the final version has colored text so it'll be obvious who is speaking
The Trojan Hawk
Prisoner in the 2nd panel is spelled with one N
Argenten
It took me a moment to realize who was saying what but that's also because it is in sketch form. in full color it'll be very easy to tell and thus no problems. Also, Holly's little kiss is very sweet and i love how some of Zak's eyes are looking at her and some are closed in "yeee! She kissed me." ness :P
ArdenW
I am liking Holly more and more.
