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FvT Definitive Edition Page 2
🕑 Added 2018-09-30 00:58:24 +0000 UTC Here we go, the first true page of the definitive edition, with revised art and color, altered texts and new format for bubbles. If you have any critique or comment, let me know below, this is the moment where I can still go back and try different stuff before I get into altering the next 200 pages :PAlso, those pages are in png format, which I believe can prevent Patreon from lowering the quality, but let me know if this is not the case and I will attach a zip file instead.
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It's as much work as a regular page I'd say, because I redo most of the lineart.
This looks incredible! I can't imagine how much extra work this will be, but I can safely say I'm excited for it :)
The Definitive edition is called like this because it's meant to be separate from the current version, not overwrite it, at least not until we're caught up to the ongoing pages. There will be new chapter division and new panels and maybe even entire new pages, so eventually the numbers will be way off by dozens. Think of it as a director's cut rather than just coloring old stuff.
No Way
I really like the improved artwork. The only thing that bothers me is the numbering, this used to be page 1 and keeping track of the numbers is going to be really confusing in the future, at least for me on my PC. I hope you reconsider about that.
You have to find the secret beaches.
Beanzoboy
Why is it they're not doing that on the beaches I've been to?
Expect_no_Mercy
Sigh... So much Love on one beach.... I think I'm gonna cry...
Argenten
is working fine for me, and looks amazing, definitely shows the effort
My, this is absolutely gorgeous !
Andrew Pam
Looks good! PNG seems to be doing the trick.
