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Chapter 43: The Ambush

🕑 Added 2023-07-23 07:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Leonard Marchant

I think that bit of tension at the end was maybe overdone, or maybe a bit repetitive? Like the situation doesn't deserve a dramatic saviour climax cliffhanger moment. I think what I'm trying to say if that it feels cheap.


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