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3.9 - Lost Bhoys [T1]

🕑 Added 2025-09-05 18:39:02 +0000 UTC

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BelligerentGnu

I'm sad now. You made me sad, Ted.

Piras

Brutal, felt this ending in my stomach man... but it's tough, after doing his best to center himself on making the most money, even at the cost of 'destroying' the fun vibe at charlton, he still doesn't get the most money he can... brutal

Pashpash

Dang. This is so heartbreaking 💔

Kanyau

"Um, nah, terrible, cut that."

hercule pyro

Yeah nick really did a number on him, with the money thing

Richard Carling

Gemma makes a smokin' Chekov's gun.

Jaydan Man

It annoys me how often i have to comment here and applaud your writing. I like being a lurker. I love how you obey one of the principal rules of writing. Everything has a cost, and winning every battle diminishes that. So even when its crucial, you hand out a loss. Brilliant.

Kanyau

That Prince confrontation was so good I had to read it aloud... twice. This one is going into the 'favourites', and I can't wait to hear it on audio. TYFTC!

James

Really great chapter. Consistent quality ted <3

Caerold

I was gonna say heartbreaking but… I was gonna say crushing… I was gonna applaud the narrative chops. Let’s just go with “Such is sport.” All of the ups and downs, nailbiters and celebration. Class act as always.

Mack

Phenomenal chapter

Uncle Snoo

He's getting too fixated on money. Which tbf not his fault but I had a feeling they would lose this one. Oh btw, could I suggest adding a transfer list (in/out + fee) along with the end of book numbers?