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4.3 - Big Dog [T1]

🕑 Added 2025-10-10 16:13:26 +0000 UTC

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Ted Steel

I do remember! I actually forgot the name of the restaurant but remembered you saying it was in Hoole and that's what I searched.

Peculiar Oranges

Hah. That punchline.

Sam McGuffin

💪🐶

Galeg

Ha, love that ending

James

STICKY WALNUT!! I cant imagine you remember but i said that was the best restaurant in hoole about 1000 chapters ago haha, love it!

Matty

I like how max tricks the Watson's a little lol. He doesn't just scare away scouts to keep prospects. Even as he's talking to them he's actively making sure they stay. Introducing them to celebrities, selfies, bribing the son with early training and debut, talking up how hes besties with Jackie the good liverpudlian. Is there like a deluge of scouts trying to get stephan that very second haha

Geoff Urland

Out of place for Soccer Supremo maybe but not for Doggy Dog: "Robbin' motherf*******, then I kill dem bloodclots Then I step through the fog and I creep through the smog 'Cause I'm Snoop Doggy (Who?) Doggy (What?) Doggy Dogg" - from Snoops first single (in 1993!), "Who Am I (What's My Name)?" Gangster and the association with gang violence has always been a part of Snoop's style and celebrity - from this first single to him Crip Walking at the Super Bowl.

Tareq Malikyar

Seeing Max get upset about misused apostrophes gets me all hot and bothered. Some much-needed emotional denouement after the previous chapter. Thanks, Ted! Edit Suggestions: but I wanted the XP, I was back in the country -- feels like this comma should be a semicolon or a period I don't tell you how to bust a cap in someone's ass -- not sure how appropriate this is tone-wise; seems off to throw in casual gun violence