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4.11 - Divide and Conquer, Divide and Rule [T1]

🕑 Added 2025-11-07 16:06:00 +0000 UTC

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Craxuan

Christ this is exactly the kind of drama I loathe with all my heart. Not saying the chapter is bad on the contrary it's amazing, but holy shit I wouldn't want to be within a kilometer of something like this happening, jesus.

Kenneth McGinnis

Long time listener, first time caller. --- I think "snap every so slightly" maybe should have been -> snap ever so slightly?

Kenneth McGinnis

Thanks for the chapter, Ted!

Richard Carling

Lesbians have a higher divorce rate than heteros, that have a higher divorce rate than male gays. There is a pattern to the drama.

Kanyau

Pascal for Charlotte, Angel for Emi?

Olof Falk

I really enjoyed this charter! Some drama is needed in every story and and I think Max being challenged in different ways keeps things from feeling rote. It's also always such a joy to see his mischievous side take the center stage :D

BelligerentGnu

No. No, I like Charlotte!

Tareq Malikyar

Agreed with the others regarding Angel being allowed to play. As readers, we know Max's reason for nixing Charlotte, but without justification to the team, this just seems like it's setting up more discord. Also, given how successfully Angel negged Emiliano before he was signed to the team, I'm not sure why Max hasn't attempted to use her to fix him (especially with the fact that she suffered from the same problem). Edit Suggestions: I massively underestimated how massive the place was -- that's a lot of massives in one sentence He saw, he conquered, he came. -- the wording here is a bit...yucky when considering what's being referred to or in a players' individual instructions. -- players' -> player's I felt more drained than I had done after managing a game since my stint in Munich -- done -> been? (idk, this clause feels off)

BelligerentGnu

"Women were uncomplicated." Oh gods. Max, no.

Jaydan Man

If it affected the women this much, I have to think there is some effect among the men too. There was a bit of writing in the last chapter that might have indicated that i think. Looking forward to if that becomes a bigger topic.