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4.12 - Victory to Escape [T1]

🕑 Added 2025-11-11 14:28:14 +0000 UTC

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Ductor Storage

I'm late but it'd be funny if Brooke had a PA of 140

Ted Steel

Fixed the mistakes, thanks!

Ted Steel

I found one (and fixed it) - thanks!

Mack

Uh. In my experience, Americans pronounce the W? The one Owen I know does say his name a bit like Oh-when but it sounds a lot like Oh-en to the point that it’s hard to know it’s there. But it’s clearly not just Oh-en when he says his name.

BelligerentGnu

"She had pronounced Owen's name as Oh-en." ....isn't this just normal? Do British people really enunciate the W?

Richard Carling

There is some leg/left confusion in there. Fixed

Tareq Malikyar

Poor Jackie. I liked this chapter quite a bit; Max's joy around the youth teams is infectious, and the way Brooke handles Max is masterful. Edit Suggestions: I could rip his head all the wayoff his body?' -- wayoff -> way off I only needed 444 XP to unlock the next achievement -- achievement -> attribute

Ted Steel

Yep!

Crimson King99

Great chapter as always. I dont think Max is wrong about how hard a line he sets for teamwork, but he only has one method for dealing with it, which is inelegant. If he was a tiny bit craftier, maybe he could sidestep some of the issues without shaking the whole club