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4.15 - Epilogue [T1]
🕑 Added 2025-11-21 18:13:45 +0000 UTCComments
Ted Steel
It's a simple iPad app called Charcoal. Very simple. Very limited! But I'm not trying to create masterpieces :)
Sergey Che
Off topic, but can you tell what do you use to draw your colorful formation graphics that look kinda hand-drawn? I need me something similar for my own story.
Thomas
Can an English football club buy a Welsh football club? If so I think Chester will soon own a club. Or perhaps Donny Wormwood will own a Welsh club. Maybe Gemma wants to own a Welsh Football club too.
Sam McGuffin
Nice!! Arc felt good, lots of focus on Max’s internal mindset and the back-and-forth between potentially climbing up to the Prem. Can’t say I’m not worried, though… there’s too much optimism in this chapter! The AI program feels especially dangerous. Is it too strong? Are they taking security precautions? 👀
Ted Steel
It's the arc from wanting to leave Chester to not wanting to win to returning to a state of Full Max.
Ted Steel
Cliff always says masseuse to the stars. Other suggestions noted, thanks!
Ted Steel
You checked about five seconds before I hit post!
Ted Steel
I've messed up the dates! Fixing now! Thanks for the heads up!
MomoKokomo
ok, I loved it even though Im mad knowing its an epilogue. Quit it with the cliffhangers!!!!! Or dont, whatever, I love you and this is my favorite series. Anyways, is the date on the last part (February 9) wrong or did I totally whoosh on something? There’s two February 9ths.
Craxuan
You were given many, many chances, Angel. All that was expected of you is to hold firm. Well, you didn't.
CMA27
Weird ending for this book. Feels unfinished and arbitrary
Tareq Malikyar
I'm expecting a cameo from Angel's sister at some point (isn't she at Saltney, or am I conflating her with someone else?). Wonderful book, and really exciting setup for the end of the season. Thanks Ted! Edit Suggestions: She'll be back but as I say, I didn't have any notice of this." -- say -> said some five-a-sides and a kid's area next year -- kid's -> kids' would increase a players' Decision score -- players' -> player's "Dahvid," said Livia. -- Dahvid -> Dahvide (I don't actually remember how his name is spelled, but you spelled it the second way for the rest of this chapter) and wondered if I could tell just by feeling -- and -> and I Masseuse to the stars. -- Masseuse -> Masseur
EducatedFool
Isnt Pascal all about that? His PA is low but he can still be a match-deciding factor in a game
Andres919
Sad if Angel does not reach her potential, but it would be nice to see the story move beyond the numbers… having a player be successful not based on PA but determination and intangibles
Will
When did this come out? I swear I checked less than 2 minutes ago
