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BSC 11: Entyar: The Ass Bend-Over: Script
🕑 Added 2024-02-13 00:05:31 +0000 UTCThe script is finished! I tried to justify the name by including some NTR in the story, but it's really not the focus... I'm personally not a huge fan of NTR... I think some of the themes can be hot, and I think the taboo element to it is exciting, but when the person being cheated on is getting half the focus of the thing, it mostly just takes me out of it. So I tried to do just a touch more than the minimum, but still keep it as a mostly background element.
Anyway, I've attached the script so anyone who wants to help me refine the story can read it and give me their critiques or suggestions... if you think anyone is acting out of character, or if you just have questions, let me know. I didn't go back and rewatch the show for this or anything, so I might have misremembered some details beyond just the stuff that had to be changed just to facilitate the porn setting (the characters are all aged up, and everyone is much more comfortable with sex and, y'know... half of them are hermaphrodites).
EDIT: Click here to download as a PDF
Comments
pawgchamp
TL:Dr I really like the script. NTR works well cause its 3 sexy futanaris. I like the fetishes of impregnation and how the jailers savor and enjoy the bodies of the Toph, Katara, and Suki. I read the script through and through and i like it! At first I scoffed at the mention of male characters in a futanari comic but they were just plot devices to fill the NTR theme. the NTR works really well here seeing as the ones doing the cucking are sexy futanaris. This reminds me of the BCC issue when Charolette meets Bianca. The premise is very hot with the three sexy girls prisoners of the three sexy futanari antagonists. I appreciate how Transmorpher took a lot of feedback in and included a lot of fetishes we wanted to see. I'm really looking forward to the sex acts (tittyfuck, ass worship, creampies) Dialogue seems really good to. I especially like how each girl is having their sexy bodies taken advantage of and explored by the 3 fire nation futas. Nothing hotter than 3 sexy futanaris loving the female body and having their way with them.
TheDarkD
Have to agree with darkknight
