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Slapstick Together Chapter 1 REBOOT (14)
🕑 Added 2023-10-30 20:36:19 +0000 UTCanother page done!
this time, there's a hand full of changes! firstly, the 4th panel (the closest to the center, Magna's reaction) shifted from a more, aloof/confused look to a more disappointed one! i also added a tiny bit of dialogue to it to help convey how she's upset that Leo got away from her again! (it also helps fill out the page a bit, since it's got a fair bit of unused space (though part of it is to build a bit of atmosphere))
and i decided to make the last panel fill out a good chunk of the page instead of just being another little panel in the corner. i find it gives it more significant and weight!
