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Slapstick Together Chapter 1 REBOOT (21)
🕑 Added 2024-02-06 21:56:38 +0000 UTCStandard page cleaning for this one!
Some dialogue tweaks, cut off the repeating "a date?" gag and went with something a little nicer, in my opinion! Leo's flattered that Magna would be so willing to go on a date with him, despite him being a toon. he's head over heels!
decided not to show Magna's phone number this time around. in the original comic, i gave her the same number that Jennifer gives Marty in Back to the Future, as a little Easter Egg! turns out, that wasn't even HER number, it was the number for her grandma's place! boy did i get egg on my face when i found that out, haha
i also added a little fuse on the second-to-last panel on Leos hair! to kind show him about to pop off into his rocket form! i thought it was a pretty neat visual to add to the panel! i also added the card inside the Leo rocket, to show he's still holding onto it, even as he flies off. it also kinda makes him look like a washing machine a little bit, which is just silly, and i love it.
overall, pretty happy with this page! onto the next one!
