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Slapstick Together Chapter 1 REBOOT (42)
🕑 Added 2024-08-12 20:30:03 +0000 UTCAlright! This one took a little while to get done because i did a fair bit of rewriting on some pages a little later down in the story, BUT, it also impact these pages couple up coming pages a bit!
as you can see from the sketch, i removed Magna's little outburst in exchange for something a bit more on par with what we've seen so far! i've still got a bit of tweaking to do, but i think this leans a bit more towards what i want the overall story to be!
i've fully removed Leo's little speech about living in a big empty void, as that DID come off to me as him trying to PERSUADE her to invite him to stay, which i didn't like! in fact, she DOESN'T invite him to stay until later one (spoilers!). He's already coming over to see her collection, and once he's there, they can figure things out on their own!
