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Slapstick Together Chapter 1 REBOOT (31)
🕑 Added 2024-06-27 00:31:47 +0000 UTCwham! another page done!
and how embarrassing! 31 pages in, and Leo doesn't even know Magna's name?
for shame... she, on the other hand, might be sharper than she leads on~
here's a couple of "big" changes from the sketch to the final page:
-3rd panel, i decided to add Judy into the frame! she's nice and centred, noticing Leo's tail wag, planting the seed for later in the comic where she comments to Magna that she's never seen him this excited before!
-6th panel, Leo with a smartphone? what was 2022 Leo THINKING. now, i know, i know he DOES canonically have a smartphone, for convenience sake, but it just looks so wrong to me seeing him scroll on a modern phone, so i opted to give him something a bit more his speed~
other than that, some small dialogue tweaks, and i MAY still go back and add the boobs come out of the 7th panel like in the original sketch. i guess i overlooked it while cleaning it up. oops!
Also maybe have Magna holding her coffee cup in the 5th panel? feels a bit odd that she doesn't have it there, i might go back an add it! we'll see!
