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Slapstick Together Chapter 1 REBOOT (36)
🕑 Added 2024-07-17 20:36:55 +0000 UTCQuite the busy page, this one!
i did a fair bit of edits on this one from the sketch, and i feel like i may still go back to it (dialogue wise) at some point! but for now, i'm quite happy with how it stands!
other than some dialogue, the main change was those last three panels! i really wanted to give Leo's spit take its room to shine, so giving it a larger panel seemed like the right move! i'm very happy with how it looks! especially that Magna face, hehe
although i do like the change in dialogue to call-back to an earlier moment between the two ( Page 27, just before they head to the bar) i'm not sure if it flows SUPER well.
i like showing Leo's hesitance, not for lack of WANTING to go over to her place, but just that nervousness of not wanting to seem to eager, which, like i said in the previous post, is DELICIOUS to watch, knowing both characters are BOTH being nervously careful with each other when they really don't need to be, but they're still learning about each other!
i DO like showing that Magna is STILL the big flirt of the two. Leo's a sweet talker, but Maggie knows how to get the gears turning, so having her be a little cheeky and pat her side IS really nice, but i think i need to think about the CONTEXT of it a little better. we'll see!
we're getting close to a little change in scenery as we go back into Leo's little void, so i'm looking forward to that! sure have another page done relatively soon!
