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🕑 Added 2023-05-02 22:37:21 +0000 UTC

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lynxir

Oh, I love the glow on their paws! Curious to learn more about them and if the different colours of the glow have a meaning or not.

OutlawRex

Rabisu naturally glow, that's not paint on them. Not sure if that's what you're referring to or not, or if it's a guess due to the aggression.

Kique Nordin

not a fan of extreme onomatopoeia but I'll try to make wispy looking text

Sunny Daze

I have to agree about adding the clicking. I felt very confused why feaf said that and had to check comments for clarification. I think even in very tiny wispy font would make it more ominous.

Tora Collita

I wonder if Marduk knows and recognizes the clicking sound?

VonTriggers

Hmm I also wonder if they took out the tribe that had the algae glowing paint.. it looks like it, but I am probably wrong.

Schwarzmondblume

Ooooh, I'm getting raptor vibes.. love it! 🤩

Jessy

uh so we finally see the Rabisu in the Comic! Nice! And its Interesting that Marduk seem maybe to know who they are, he reacts way different then the others. Also i feel like they ARE after Marduk, i hope no one of the others get killed. Also, i goddamn love Panic ♥

ArtemistheArtist22

7 of them, if all in the Asmundr pack know whats going on, they have them outnumbered, LEAVE MY BABIES ALONE i hope no casualties on the asmundr side occur, please please please be safe 🥺

VonTriggers

These guys must be why the other canines hate long fanged ones explains it all.. sucks for Jahla since she isn’t even apart of them and there tribe.

ah, okay! Just looks weird she saying it but no sound text is being seen. Have you ever considered using an onomatopoeia font generator or downloading some fonts that have onomatopoeia? I don't know if you've ever experimented with different sound text before but I hear it's fun. Hope I'm using the right word...onomatopoeia.

Kique Nordin

I didn’t like the sound effects so felt the character mentioning it was enough x)

There are no clicking sounds on the page! Like nothing to indicate they're making the sound so its confusing with what Feaf is saying. Maybe add some text that saying "click" or something? : ) Like on the 4th and 6th panel?