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Guild Mage 57

🕑 Added 2024-12-31 19:55:44 +0000 UTC

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Cryptiddies

... Huh. I have some theories about how all of this connects back to the Ractian bloodcults. I'll be very curious to see if I'm right.

Imspinnennetz

Well a part of me wonders who gave the additional set of orders to attempt to trap and kill Liv after luring her there. If Benedict is to be believed, he just wants her out of his hair. So, it might be Millicent or the queen who tacked on the attack on Liv to the original plan.

Deliver roo

True but Liv and her father could hold a grudge. They might not overthrow the royal family today but how can they be certain that they won’t work toward that goal in a few decades if they leave as enemies.

Deliver roo

Maybe not but it is risky to have elves as enemies for any human. If they hold a grudge they might come after the royal family some time in the future if there is an occasion. That is probably why the prince told Liv to just go away, because respondingo to an enemy that can attack two or three generations down the royal line without anyone expecting it could be problematic.

Jake

I wonder if Milly engineered this of her own volition, call it revenge for the duel. It just seems too boneheaded of a move to be coming from the Queen.

Rip Woodham

There may not be much they can do to someone that doesn't care. Overthrowing the royal family probably isn't something they could just do easily, and if they did, they would be jeopardizing their race's alliance with humanity, of which they are only one house. They are allies and don't get involved in each other's rule afaik, which would make it quite the precedent and destabilize things in a time for unity. What's been done to Liv is very upsetting, but in a blink to them the queen will be dead from age. It may be disappointing, but that is probably their perspective on how to solve issues with humanity, just let them pass, and House Syva will probably just be trying very hard to remove Liv from the situation.

Nopret

Thanks for the chapter. The prince faction is going to be angry that she used lightning. It's going to be hilarious when she explains that she didn't need Luc. Magic words being status symbols will also make this a political statement, even if Liv did not intend it as one.

Rip Woodham

The prince is not the one behind this, he at least had enough sense to see that it would be bad for her to be killed once it was blindingly obvious and tried to get her to leave. He knew the queen would go off the rails and wipe the family out, but even he probably didn't think she would be so brazen as to try to kill the children immediately following the political move Julianne made, in the city with the gathering and all the attention. I wonder if she went after Julianne/Henry at the same time too. Unfortunately it makes sense how relentless she is being - she's probably always been able to do mostly what she wanted, she's been trying to kill Julianne since she was a girl and the king couldn't/wouldn't step in firmly enough. Her son isn't going to be wearing the pants in the family, either. It's typically the most ambitious people with the least scruples that claim power, after all, and she wouldn't let go willingly.

Arkzs

alright I keep hearing about how important a daughter is to the house of syva, this is three times now prince benedicts faction has put her in danger, once with stone bat once with the duel and finally an obvious assassination attempt, if the elds are worth their salt they collect painful interest for this

Darastrix

I mean Tropes work don't they? It's a chicken or the egg question. But ppl usually complain when a trope is pulled off badly, I think the execution is textbook and works fine for the story so I like it.

Tarrim

I assume the reason they tried to kill her this way is they were hoping to remove her without revealing how it happened. Now that is out the window and all that remains to see is how the eld and house sylva will react.

John Koor

Also, keep in mind he got word that his potential daughter was already pulled into a duel with the potential for death. That would light a fire under his ass.

Imspinnennetz

If it were any other person but the heir to the throne, they could probably bulldoze through any opposition to get to him. However, I think that the eld can't directly accuse the Prince without some sort of proof.

John Koor

I doubt the eld will require legal proof.

John Koor

“Through your knife down,” Throw. Great chapter! I have a feeling the royal line will soon end. Dang. I need more. More chapters plz!

Zaeron

Definitely a little trope-y but I really liked it overall. He writes action so well that it's honestly kind of fun to me when he does tropes like this because you get to see em done really well.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

Gopard

I makes sense though... We know the importance of children among the Eld, let alone ELDER BLOOD children, couple that with this being either the HEAD or direct HEIR of House Syvä Essentially Eld Royalty him rushing as fast as possible makes sense, they have magical teleportation and as Rulers of a house also certainly enough strong mages to get him going the moment they arrive each time at a Waystone... that he then comes along when the ambassodor informs him of what that signal means is a matter of course. The timeline also makes sense. It has been more than a full day since the message right? So even if he was "at home" (which is hard to reach bc the difficult waystone) him arriving about now was in the timeline the ambassador thought possible, but if he was in a more accessable city he could have been there even in the same night right? Teleportation is instant as long as you have the mana, travelling the neglible distance between capital and waystone is easy for very powerful mages. So its only the "traveltime" of "second closest waystone to the home city of House Syvä".

Imspinnennetz

I was hoping that Josephine would be kept alive for interrogation. Now Liv has no way to prove that it was the Prince who sent the assassin. The gulls directing the attack has plausible deniability.

lenkite

Yo, the father leaves no thug alive for questioning. It would be such a pity if the assassin got away.

william wallace

Fun chapter but I don’t love her father showing up to save her. The other eld makes sense but this feels a bit forced. Not horrible but just a bit trope-y. Liked the chase and fight in the alley. That worked well. The birds are a nice touch. Excited for the next one. Happy New Year!!!!


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