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Guild Mage 72

🕑 Added 2025-01-15 14:36:49 +0000 UTC

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Grayson

Deterrence only works if enemies know about prior to outbreak of conflict...

Dave N

I think that's an easy enough fix, given the beginning of the next chapter. I'll see if I can do it today

lenkite

Signing without witnesses makes no sense for these kinds of things. The matter of a heir usually has several witnesses.

william wallace

Definitely think Matthew needed something that he was good at (part of why he gravitated to the sword) and he may also have just been a person that hates book learning. Im also pretty sure learning a word is much harder than Liv expects. It would be good to show her struggle with some aspects of mana. We saw a bit with the adamant ice, but the most interesting character growth comes from struggles and limitations. At least in my opinion.

Tarrim

My personal guess on why he struggled with magic is that his only peer was Liv making him feel vastly inadequate. While it has never been confirmed I would be surprised if Julilenne never learned the word. I do want to see when Liv finally learns her new word so we understand the process better. Depending on how it works it might be possible to learn a word from a book or something similar which could serve as a backup. I suspect any King would be very interested in ensuring his kingdom doesn't lose a word.

william wallace

Sure but she will live a long time. She doesn’t need to learn it now, just retain the right to do so. Especially given that Matthew and the baron are currently the only two people who have the right to use the word (that we know of). Really don’t want a word of power to die out. On a related note, i hope Matthew has developed some minimal level of competence with his magic. I would assume so from his past few years of travel. But im betting its just rote memorized spells not competence with the language/grammar.

Tarrim

I assume she technically could but won't at least any time soon. She already has 3 highly useful words she wants to learn in short order why add more difficulty for a word she doesn't really want.

Maritienna

"the warm flow of firelight" -> glow "nearly always had bandaged" -> bandages

Maritienna

Yeah, in the chapter for Cushing's funeral it's written that "it had been a dozen years since the eruption", and the bar fight was immediately after that.

Dave N

Good catch, thank you!

Jake

Reveal as required.

william wallace

So did Liv negotiate just for lightning or for dehydration as well?

Grayson

How can Liv be a deterrent to attacks on the Somersets if her adoption into the family is a secret???

Jake

Wasn't the scuffle at the tavern more like 12 years ago at this point? I thought it was when she was like 24, and now she's 36?

Dave N

Both

Dave N

thank you! I think I can slide a mention into 69, that's a good idea

Dave N

Whitehill is on the same mountain chain as Mountain Home, and the port is east of that, as opposed to significantly north. I plan on doing a map for the ebook/print release.

Grayson

Is Liz being asked to sign to be a second heir, or to act as a family member who can deter/protect the family against Benedict?

Tarrim

“If Master Grenfell can give me enough bags of mana-dust, I’ll see to that,” Liv said. “You’ll have everything in my stores,” her old teacher promised.  “And the largest stone, as well.  You know the one.  You’ll need every bit of stored mana you can bring.” The manastone dust belongs to the sumersets rather than Grenfell Iirc. I also personally feel there should have been a reference to her father being gone in 69.

Dave N

Yeah, that makes sense. Will fix it!

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! Just noticed one glaring detail... "Triss was wearing Boots that went UP TO HER HIPS"??? I mean that MAY be somewhat fashionable among some circles today but in now way is that practical for a magical fighter... Not to mention Triss is also more of a quick fencer type with her word... She anticipates the opponents moves thus she NEEDS mobillity to make use of that. Kinda just felt weird to me reading it there lol^^ So there it is... I was wondering about that since you did say before that "Liv will be fighting in at least one eruption before she goes to Coral Bay" and we had those rifts erupting in "The North"... However one thing thats strange to me still didn't the Goddess claim she only let "those in the far north erupt" to "keep the fighting in Selthys (wrong spelling but the Port city of the Eld they attacked) limited"... Does this mean Witehill is actually more north than that Port? Or is this rift erupting also bc it was just sooo close to an eruption anyways...?

Dave N

53

Tarrim

I'm assuming her having been around 25 during the first eruption. Maybe a few years either way but that is just my guess

melchi

Yeesh, big age gap if her husband is 60

Tarrim

She is probably late 40s early 50s at this point in the story.

melchi

Sad to see Julian diminished. She was always the pillar that kept everything together.

Dave N

Second day home with my son. Bit of a sore throat, we'll see. Time to earn our RR Dungeon Crawl tag.


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