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Guild Mage 105

🕑 Added 2025-02-17 14:31:01 +0000 UTC

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Tarrim

He killed one I suspect what happened was essentially a military coup of the elders those still loyal to the elders a good many may have stayed behind

lenkite

He first targeted and killed all the Irivata elders. All the forewarning and even notice of betrayal was proven utterly useless since they never prepped for battle. Wren could have just kept her mouth shut for all the effect it had.

Grayson

Why should her great-uncle's family care about or teach her?? Too distant a relationship.

Tarrim

She still has her grandmother's family if something happens to both of them. I'm guessing she will learn time in the gap between when she graduates and most of her new friends do. That's 1-2 years to work on a very tricky word.

Grayson

Her father is heading to war, while her grandmother will fight to the death if Kelthelis is attacked--they should teach Liz TIME now, in case they fall in battle...

Tarrim

I don't see why her grandmother knowing would be more likely then her father. Who would have told her except Liv or her father. She's only spent 1-2 months with Liv so it not coming up in their conversations is much more believable IMO. I'm not sure whether her father would report it to his parents or not.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

Gopard

I feel like just make the Lucanian nobles ask honestly...? Her grandmother is an even worse fit than Liv to ask as she was kind of co-leader of am entire house for her to not know would be even stranger than for Liv's Father to never have heard about Liv meeting her first Eld getting her first glimpse into that culture. And I presume having at least some small fights about "If you had allowed him to tell us I could have been there for you years earlier"... Meeting Airis was one of THE big events that happened to Liv in that time I mean it's even one of her big personality shaping events with the way he "taught" her to handle her bullies. Obviously this isn't a large immersion breaking thing. But I think it's another one of those small things. Liv would have told her father most every of the big happenings of her life by now and especially one so closely related to the Eld I feel...

Dave N

good catch, thank you!

sings_with_toads

Nicely done. Edit recommendation: "she’d know the horses weren’t suited for the journey" -> "she’d *known* the horses weren’t suited for the journey

Tarrim

I'd still be surprised they never discussed him in the 6 years they spent together. My suggestion would be for the question to come from her grandmother instead.

Dave N

She did say the name, and then the conversation sort of tumbled on past that and dad never followed up. Adding a line here where he remembers and says “Come to think of it, that’s the second time you’ve mentioned his name.”

Dave N

100%. Not sure quite when I'll be able to slip in what Airis finds, but I do want to.

Dave N

Let me go check that conversation and maybe make adjustments!

Tarrim

I'd also expect there to be a split in irivata since it seems at least the elders weren't fully on board.

Tarrim

I think it's a bit odd that her father didn't know she and airis had meet. She asked her father about him when he returned after the wave of eruptions.

Dave N

Thank you so much!

Cascano Richard

A just gave a minute of silence for fictional character. Good job


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