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The Last Guardian (Ch. 10)

🕑 Added 2025-12-04 04:13:25 +0000 UTC

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SaintMichael95

I have to be brutally honest here, I think this story has completely lost the plot, especially in the last few chapters. I think you need to rethink the entire thing from the ground up and make a decision on what kind of story you actually want to write, because here's my interpretation of what you've written so far. You clearly want to follow the main plot of Smallville with little to no interference from Harry, but the problem is that you've also established a character that should be powerful enough and smart enough to completely no-sell nearly the entire plot of Smallville. Harry, as you've established him should have to capability AND the motivation to make almost any problem that arises irrelevant, so to write the plot lines you want to write, Harry has to be portrayed as a complete imbecile or just so lazy and callous as to not actually deal with the problem at hand even though he could basically snap his fingers and fix it all. And I think you've probably realized that, but were either hoping or thinking that your paying patrons either wouldn't catch on to it or wouldn't care and were just in it for the eventual sex scenes. Clearly that isn't working, and many of us do in fact enjoy a good plot to go with our porn.

Triton

Thanks for the chapter but just go away with the plot of smallville please you made harry superman with lantern powers snd now he is just useless and fragile, he saved lana and others hundred people of a flaming plane she shouldn't be so surprise anymore, leave smallville as a side bonus of harry daily life, go for DC fights and villans, go for saving people harry at moment the only thing worth reading this is the time you put to write and the slow burn of harry and the girls

Seth Zsembery

I’m fairly certain that he, like other green lanterns, is still essentially human when the suit isn’t on. So he can still get shot and hit on the head with a pipe. He might be a little more durable, but not much when he’s not using the powers.

gigamans

He is able to literally ram his body through the ground into that cave(if I’m recalling correctly) and a bullet, as well as a 100 pound girl with a bat, are able to knock him on his ass.

John

I am so happy to see two more chapters of this. While some of it didn't make sense with Harry somehow being shot and hit with a pipe even though he is pretty much bullet proof. I am still MAJORLY looking forward to the next chapters. I also wanna say thank you the double chapters were a very nice Christmas surprise


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