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Off Duty - Page 3
🕑 Added 2020-10-04 16:08:41 +0000 UTC“Off Duty” page 3
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Thanks for the comments, again its my first comic, so trying my best as im still new to how to frame and show action. But defiantly appreciate the constructive criticism.
Turjas
Love the artwork! Although, I’ve got to say that I find the labeling of the actions in the panes to be unnecessary and quite frankly, distracting overall. But that’s just my opinion.
Timmainsson
Nice use of lighting and the(OMG THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!) warm colours give a delightful feel oncoming home to a place of safety
