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Mothership Chapter One Discussion Thread
🕑 Added 2023-09-05 17:30:31 +0000 UTCHey folks,
Just as with Mandrill, I thought I'd start a separate thread for people to discuss my newest release, Mothership: Chapter One!
Leave any and all thoughts, comments, questions, or general feedback here, and thanks to all who picked it up!
And don't forget, if you haven't bought it yet, use the discount code JACOB to take $5 off at checkout!
Comments
Michael
I haven't purchased it yet (quite possible I will later) but the price per page for an intro, even with the subscriber discount, seems steep. I would have expected closer to half the current cost.
James
I think that the polish on everything is nice, it looks really good. The pushback you might be getting is mostly do to what you said on the tin essentially, this chapter just didn’t have much going on. It’s a setup piece, which is necessary, but I think bang for buck would be the main factor people will point out. I think future chapters will be better just because there’s more going on. You’ve already mentioned it but reevaluating price/discount would probably go a long way for folks.
