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59. Basil - Closing Doors

🕑 Added 2024-12-04 04:20:36 +0000 UTC

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Ryan Prendergast

Basil doesn't need to do that! Just agree to an Alliance with Hull's Mother, have her murder the Vampire and take Esmi's card and BOOM instant dysfunctional family.

Clem Rossi

I just personnaly don't believe in esmi being dead as a character, at worst as a summoner. Some form of plot device to force Basil to grow by giving him a well defined goal like bringing her back to life through elevating her card.

Hailhound

Yeah, and the next book is shaping up to be real interesting. The war is over, but both of them are still fighting, Hull from without and Basil from within the enemies ranks. Not what I expected NGL.

RainbowPhaze

I was going to save this comment for next chapter, but I wanna get it out there before I forget... I'm really glad that at the end of each book, the status quo has changed. It's not just that time has passed and our protags are stronger, the state of their lives and how things will go forward in the future has markedly changed from what we expected before. A worse writer would've (besides not getting this far to begin with) had Hull and Basil end this book off as stronger versions of themselves having just narrowly defended the city and going on to continue their lives with only a few oblique references to the necessity of rebuilding. Instead we have them separated, the things they were aspiring towards permanently altered by outside forces (can't kill your dead dad, your fiance is a card you can't even cast, can't become king of a destroyed city)

RainbowPhaze

Esmi huh? Wow. I guess a war isn't exactly a favourable aggro matchup, and she was the only one of them without a way to replenish their cards

Ryan Prendergast

Oof... Off-screened too, that's brutal.

Joxter

Yea not a fan of the ending

Kyle

Wth Scribe like GOD DAMN

thisisniall

The end of this book is an absolutely wild ride

Sharrif

FUCK. FUCKKKKK.

Furious Scribe

FYI: Book 2 has one chapter remaining, an Epilogue from an alternate perspective.


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