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Monday: Director's Cut
🕑 Added 2021-08-03 08:23:41 +0000 UTCSometimes I get a little too tied up on one part of a strip (in this case, the sound effects, all of which came from actual Don Martin comics) and neglect others. Upon re-reading, it occurred to me that the sound effects needed at least a little action to make them "fit" the strip better. So I added some parts and tools being flung about, which I think ties it together a bit better.
I also redid the fellows' arm in the last panel to make the pose look a little more natural, added a bit of a scowl, and slightly redid his dialogue.
Sometimes things just need a little retconning. :D
Doc.
Comments
Chris Neal
FWEEN! is still one of my favorites. Maybe also my next band's name...
Delisle
This was great!
Tom Hancock
You forgot one of my favorites: KLOON!
Walter W Matera
Even better than your first version.
Darque Hellmutt
Oh, how I miss the old-timie MindAD Magazine!
Jim Sharkey
This was a very good gag, by the by.
I grew up with Don in the '60s. "I do not look like a plate of spaghetti."
