Zedrin
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FEEDBACK FOR SECRET THING
🕑 Added 2024-06-01 03:09:03 +0000 UTCTHE SECOND PLUSHIE IS COMING
I'm currently in the feedback phase / first iteration. There's a few changes I want to request, but I also want to see what people comment on as well.
Here's a copy paste of the feedback I'm planning to send to Makeship. It's a little long, apolocheese (you don't need to read it, just please give me your own thoughts the plushie itself! I wanna see what lines up with what I already sent or if you guys notice anything different.)
Requested changes:
Overall:
I've provided a reference of my prior plushie campaign. Sorry for not providing it sooner! I want her to feel similar in style to my last campaign, so I might refer to the old plush a few times (the "Pivot plushie").
The following notes are a more organized recap of the notes in the image.
Head:
Can the bow have a bit more of a bow shape, and go over the top of the ponytail slightly? (Even if it's just two parts sewn together, if they can connect there.)
Can you shrink the head vertically just a small bit?
For her ears, can you make them slightly bigger, and fold downward? As is they kind of fold forward. Additionally, is there a slightly more purple color available at all, e.g. similar to the skirt?
Face:
For her eyes, my followers requested going with her original eye design, instead of the simplified one I provided originally. Would it be possible to change the pattern to feature the heart pupils depicted, while converting the eye shines to normal round ones?
Additionally, the eyes are a bit big / far apart. Can we shrink them slightly and move them in a bit? I'd like the orientation / general shape / position to be similar to the Pivot plushie.
Limbs:
For the arm bands, is it at all possible to use a separate material that goes over the arms, instead of printing directly to it? It's not super critical if this is not possible, but I would like the bands to be just a tiny bit longer if possible, covering more of the hands, without changing the length of the arms. (Tiny "hands" for her are completely acceptable.)
The shoulders seem a bit pinched when viewed from the side. Is it possible to thicken things up slightly, make them more round/cylindrical? They may need to be moved back slightly as well.
For the legs, is it also possible to slightly thicken them? If it's at all possible to do a pattern where the bottom seam is circular/cylindrical instead of a pinch, I'd like that, but I understand if that adds too much complexity.
Body:
The chest in particular I think needs a few changes; as is it feels like there's sort of a sock around her breasts, or that they're sewn on. Is it possible to make seem more like a single part, though still feel organic? The curvature of the corset (darker material) doesn't need to be as pronounced either.
The seams in particular highlight things a bit awkwardly; if possible, maybe a single seam down the middle would work? If it does, it would feel like the buttons / clasp / zipper of her shirt and corset/waistcoat.
A slight bit of curvature to the cloth pattern and the physical shape is preferred, but I'm hoping the changes I'm requesting are also simpler to implement.
Additionally, for her waistcoat on the back, can the edge be lowered a bit?
Lower priority, if it's possible to thin her back and waist a little, I would appreciate that, but I don't want to compromise her ability to sit up.
Overall, the colors on everything are great, only color-change I can notice at the moment would be for the ears.
Thank you!
Comments
Shadefalcon
Very cute!
Zedrin
I originally decided to not go for heart pupils, as i felt they'd make the eyes too different from the pivot plush and would be too detailed. But a lot of people have commented on them otherwise, so I'm electing to request them again.
Tamale
I immediately noticed the lack of heart pupils. Its impressive how much of a difference the bow placement makes too.
