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A New Sun Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2023-10-19 23:50:58 +0000 UTC

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IkoalaG

Liking the development you are going through, there is almost none of the shakiness your writing had from the start, really good 👍. Characterization is strong and you are doing your own thing in the verse.

Lictor Magnus

I’m glad you stuck with what made the most sense. Too many MCs hop into impossible battles for no reason. It would be one thing if Yaska was away and they just had to hold the line, but she was right there. No reason to get involved 😅

Dirk Gent Lee

Strong chapter


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