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Chapter 71

🕑 Added 2021-03-12 16:45:59 +0000 UTC

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Huh... I'm not sure how to feel about this one. This ending feels very... Silly. Out of place? The sex part was fine, kinda more interested in the actual story now, rather than the erotic moments that happen. But having her stuck on him and it being a thing he's gotta potentially intimidate people whilst dealing with seems.... Uncouth (is that a word? I feel like it's a word that would fit my feelings right now). So far the main hits of the story have been leaning a little more on the serious side, and while I have absolutely no issues with levity in storytelling, this feels a teeny bit forced. Kinda like an "oops! Looks what happened to me!" kinda thing. But I know it won't last for long.

Skyler Simmons

"Squirt slurked from her lower lips" I love this phrase. "Slurk" is a most interesting verb. Author-san, do you mind if I use it? Frequently?

Mzku

even better 🤓


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