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Alan and Louis on vacation // writing snippet + doodles
🕑 Added 2020-08-12 19:58:03 +0000 UTCSomething very different this time! I used to love writing in my native language in the past, and I was quite good at it for a 12 year old, but honestly there's no way I'm going to ever reach the level I had back then, let alone in another language 😂 It was my first time trying to write anything coherent in English, I apologize if it's painful to read (hopefully at least a bit less painful than it was to write lmao). I was bored at the beach at the last day of my vacation so I wanted to try writing a short snippet to imagine their characters more. I wanted to focus on a general feel of their relationship and idea of going on vacation together since I have a few vacation themed drawings in mind for them. Either way it's just a big experiment haha. (Hugely inspired by @t0k0r010's amazing writing that sadly exceeds my current level of language comprehension but at least got me to try something on my own for once 😔)
That said, if anyone here is good at English and feels like correcting my mistakes, please hmu!! 🥺
Doodles are taken directly from the pictures I took that I wanted to play with. I hope I'll come up with something decent at home if I don't go insane haha
Comments
Excellent writing!
Ola
Thank you!!! TT
!!! Beautiful !!!
Ola
Aw really, I'm glad! 😭💖 Especially since more often than not I'm just guessing haha. And yes! 👀 Thank you! 💕💕💕💕
The grammar and syntax are perfectly correct, which I think is really good since you aren't a native English speaker. Aw it looks like Louis is attracted to Alan cos it revitalises him. It's really cute^^
